You had a good storyline going, but I would have liked to see what happened after the police arrived. There were a couple shots where the characters heads got cut off and it took me out of the story.
I liked the different angles of shots you had. There were a few times when the background noise was too loud. I liked the dialogue between the neighbor and the robber.
I felt the way the story was portrayed was really clear and the casting worked really well especially the guy playing the unexpected visitor. The camera work was mostly well done but there were times like when they are standing by the stairs that it felt cut off since their heads were cut off ad their bodies weren't doing a whole lot.
I thought this was kind of funny. The story line is a little unclear and some of the cuts are also a little jerky. Also the sound could be worked with a little bit. Other than that it was good!
It seemed a little hard to follow. The audio was a little weak in this video, but the imagery got the point across.
ReplyDeleteYou had a good storyline going, but I would have liked to see what happened after the police arrived. There were a couple shots where the characters heads got cut off and it took me out of the story.
ReplyDeleteI liked the different angles of shots you had. There were a few times when the background noise was too loud. I liked the dialogue between the neighbor and the robber.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Good actors. Really believed what was happening. Camera work is a little weak.
ReplyDeleteI felt the way the story was portrayed was really clear and the casting worked really well especially the guy playing the unexpected visitor. The camera work was mostly well done but there were times like when they are standing by the stairs that it felt cut off since their heads were cut off ad their bodies weren't doing a whole lot.
ReplyDeleteI thought the continuity and acting of the film was great. Just some problems with camera movement and such.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was kind of funny. The story line is a little unclear and some of the cuts are also a little jerky. Also the sound could be worked with a little bit. Other than that it was good!
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